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THEN
WE PARTED - a feature length
film script of 106 minutes
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The
LOG LINE: The
struggle with retrieving and accepting memory with
its unique ramifications is paramount. The
narrative of this
adaptation of the novel "Straw Man"
unfolds as a detective story with twisting
turns of decision making and fact finding.
The STORY
and STORY LINE: As
an intellectually-romantic love story, a struggle with an acceptance of
memory is consistent, as the protagonist repeatedly sets memory aside. Being in his fifties
with newly retrieved memories, he is able to reflect on both the negative and
positive controls set forth by his female loves, his relatives, and his long term
friends. The love interest is shown to
experience Dissociative Identity Disorder symptoms (DID.
or Multiple Personalities) as the story evolves around coping with
her personal history, her resulting actions and her final
hospitalization. The ultimate form of rationalization is shown to
be his forgetting, and then carrying on as if that inflicted hurt did not
exist.
The PLOT LINE: Flashbacks
of childhood brutality occur during recuperation from Dissociative
Systemized Amnesia. "Tony" must first realize that amnesia existed by way
of flashbacks and he needed to believe that he was insane
with false memories, or – sane with accepting the memories.
The SUBPLOT and CHARACTER ARC: The retrieval of lost
memories was followed by a self-reflective process relative to life choices of
both vocation and relationships. The individual of the
storyline has been somewhat controlled throughout his life and comes to the full realization of this.
Love
conflicts and change in lifestyle patterns are at an interesting and
credible level. Exploring the realm of Hypnotherapy and Psychology, the storyline is
nonfiction and it does have a happy ending.
The uniqueness is firstly, that
these types of
Post-traumatic Stress Disorder have only been defined within the last
two decades, and secondly, only less academically correct stories of Multiple
Personalities were available. © Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2008.
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ANNE
AND JEAN - an
exciting Canadian feature length film script
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The
LOG LINE: Danger, adventure and the unknown are a part of the life
of Jean Pelletier as he leaves France in 1641 at fourteen years old and
begins his life in Canada. It presents his ongoing struggle, as that of being fulfilled with being an artist, versus being a
farmer - and Anne's unusual marriage at thirteen to him.
The STORY LINE: Seventeenth century mythology, the controls
and rigidity of the Catholic Church, along with daily fears of the
unknown, are incorporated throughout with ongoing
subtlety. In a youth of adult
responsibility, both Jean and Anne's obedience
to church and family is consistent, however, the story evolves through
Jean's struggles with being an artist in a land of rugged toil and Anne's
determination to produce a large family. Jean becomes
known throughout the two regions for his pottery, but is tied to the land as
a farmer, father and obedient son. Twenty-first century
perceptions create an opportunity to revisit a story
of history in a manner never before shown.
The PLOT LINE:
Contrary to most writings about early New France, this script is written by a Western Canadian, hence a varied outlook as compared. The story is based on fact and
documented history, albeit documents showing the
negative impact on Jean and Anne, as they are used as pawns by both church and
state. This adaptation of the novel titled, "Anne And
Jean" is also available for production in French.
©
Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2008.
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LIFE'S
THIRD QUARTER - A MUSICAL - the
music, the lyrics and the book
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The LOG LINE:
This is a musical with a very positive presentation of our life cycle as having gained one
extra quarter of its total. With change in life style being a primary
focus, the musical play is evocative of the assumption that this is a
creative third quarter, rather than that of merely gaining additional
elderly years.
The
SCENARIO: A musical romantic comedy about divorce, adjustment to mid-life and
the reuniting of two high school sweethearts. It is an adaptation from
the musical play and takes place in the Gulf Islands of the Pacific
Coast. This is a low budget film as the three scenes are
easily shot in existing natural scenery with one cabin sequence.
The PLOT LINE: Life, even after
fifty, is not without issues, and
as in any of the comicality, the sentimental is more profound, and of
greater relevant substance, when taken from the family problems of real
life. A
mature age group will identify with the premise that not only have we
all statistically been granted an extra one quarter of life to enhance
our 21st century lifestyle, we've been given a second chance.
The SUBPLOT: The music sets forth the premise that this is a time to
live and love - again - in this, our life's third quarter. Optional
music is included above the length of the original one and one-half hour musical play. ©
Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2008.
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ROBBIE PHALLIC McKINNIS - a
comedy with
music, lyrics, off-side poetry and the book
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The LOG LINE:
This is comedy and frolic with hopefully not a serious line
in it. It was written with the intent of presenting a contemporary "Gullivers
Travels" for comedians. A common thread of decadence is
happily shown, coupled
with a
positive exploration for love and a light hearted search
for self-worth.
The
SCENARIO: A fun presentation about sex and travel to fictitious lands,
this is a low budget film as the scenes are
easily shot in existing natural scenery on any of the worlds beaches - as
the lead comedian takes us through Robbie's rather dubious world adventures.
The PLOT LINE: The plot is held together by a use of narration with a
subtle use of references to many travelogues, international intrigue and
just having fun. The music includes rather lewd songs, as now almost forgotten, from the 1940s and
1950's. They were never recorded as they only existed at parties accompanied by an adequate amount of alcohol.
As an adaptation from the play, the script works much
better in film. The film script is also easily adapted to animation. The misspelling of the name is
intentional and the work requires one more edit for completion. ©
Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2012.
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500 YEARS -
an
exciting Canadian feature length film script, now optioned as sold
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The
LOG LINE: The lives of the Pelletier descendants evolve from the
15th through to the 20th century showing the history of
Canada as entertainment. Each region settled gives personal and
political intrigue.
The STORY LINE: The moves of the family coincide with new early settlements and the challenges of those
pioneering areas. The stories of these individuals are both
stand alone chronicles and a reflection of history leading into
the future. The chronicles are about love and adventure, with a balance of the realism of frustration and
failure.
The PLOT: Canadian civilization and culture has evolved and
expanded, in spite of often ridiculous administrative control by
both church and state. The script has been written for CGI and
animation format. © Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2009.
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HISTORY NOW - an editing and shooting script for a
documentary, now optioned as sold
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The
LOG LINE: Ancient sites and art
may be shown to be rebuilt or restored beyond that which may be called
authentic. That which was original is often changed to being merely a
simulated antique, a reproduction. The visual repercussions of tourism changing
due to changing presentations of history is shown.
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The
locations are explored in this contemporary video series as an insightful world
panorama: |
| Galapagos Islands,
Ecuador |
- newly redefined
destination |
Paris, France |
- redone with originality |
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Yucatan Peninsula, Mexico |
- rebuilt ruins with
new
layout |
Bavarian Germany |
- new castle for tourism |
| Port-Royal, NS.,
Canada |
- replication by
building code |
Tuscany
in Italy |
- local language change |
| Luzern, Switzerland |
- oldest bridge
replacements |
Ephesus, Turkey |
- monuments restored |
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Ubar, SE Arabian peninsula |
- re-planned and
restructured |
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© Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2010 |
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First draft screenplays
with option rights available.
Professionally written film scripts on
spec.
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