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SCREENWRITING
professionally written First Drafts on spec
ideal for option right development phases
adaptations from novels by the original
author
- screenwriter, Lonnie Pelletier
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THEN
WE PARTED
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#01
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THE
FEATURE LENGTH FILM SCRIPT IS 106 MINUTES.
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The
LOG LINE: The
struggle with retrieving and accepting memory with
its unique ramifications is paramount. The
narrative of this
adaptation of the novel "Straw Man"
unfolds as a detective story with twisting
turns of decision making and fact finding.
The STORY
and STORY LINE: As a love story
it may be described as intellectually romantic. Acceptance of
memory is consistent, as the protagonist repeatedly sets it aside only
to find that it is necessary. Being in his fifties he is now able to
reflect on both the negative and
positive controls set forth by his female loves, his relatives, and his long term
friends.
The love interest is shown to
experience Dissociative Identity Disorder symptoms (DID.
or Multiple Personalities) as the story evolves around coping with
her personal history, her resulting actions and her final
hospitalization. The ultimate form of rationalization is shown to
be forgetting, and then carrying on as if that inflicted hurt did not
exist.
"Tony" must first realize that amnesia existed by way
of flashbacks and he doesn't know if he is sane until the
last scenes. The psychiatrist
called it: “having to deal with the glass being half empty
or half full”. That is, Tony needed to believe that he was insane
with false memories or – sane with accepting the memories - and in
that there is a wonderful story.
The PLOT LINE: Flashbacks
of childhood brutality occur in dealing with Dissociative
Systemized Amnesia and the following attempt to get on with life.
A first step in its treatment is the retrieval of lost memories,
followed by a self-reflective process relative to life choices of
both vocation and relationships. The individual of the
storyline has been somewhat controlled throughout his life and
only comes to the full realization of this through the process.
Exploring the realm of Hypnotherapy and Psychology, the storyline is
nonfiction and it does have a happy ending. These types of
Post-traumatic Stress Disorder have only been defined within the last
two decades. The past has seen less academic stories of Multiple
Personalities, however, this script is certain to present both love
conflicts and change in lifestyle patterns - at a very interesting and
credible level. ©
Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2008.
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ANNE
AND JEAN
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#02
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ANNE AND JEAN IS AN EXCITING
- CANADIAN - FEATURE LENGTH FILM SCRIPT.
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The
LOG LINE: Danger, adventure and the unknown are a part of the life
of Jean Pelletier as he leaves France in 1641 at fourteen years old and
begins his life in Canada. It presents his ongoing struggle, as that of being fulfilled with being an artist, versus being a
farmer - and Anne's unusual marriage at thirteen to him.
The STORY and STORY LINE: Seventeenth century mythology, the controls
and rigidity of the Catholic Church, along with daily fears of the
unknown, are incorporated throughout with ongoing
subtlety. In a youth of adult
responsibility, both Jean and Anne's obedience
to church and family is consistent, however, the story evolves through
Jean's struggles with being an artist in a land of rugged toil and Anne's
determination to produce a large family. Jean becomes
known throughout the two regions for his pottery, but is tied to the land as
a farmer, father and obedient son. Twenty-first century
perceptions create an opportunity to revisit a story
of history in a manner never before shown.
The PLOT LINE:
Contrary to most writings about early New France, this script is written by a Western Canadian, hence a varied outlook as compared. The story is based on fact and
documented history, albeit documents showing the
negative impact on Jean and Anne, as they are used as pawns by both church and
state. This adaptation of the novel titled, "Anne And
Jean" is also available for production in French.
©
Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2008.
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LIFE'S
THIRD QUARTER - A MUSICAL |
#03 |
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THE
ONE-HOUR TELEVISION SCREENPLAY IS READY TO BE PRODUCED.
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The LOG LINE:
This is a musical with a very positive presentation of our life cycle as having gained one
extra quarter of its total. With change in life style being a primary
focus, the musical play is evocative of the assumption that this is a
creative third quarter - rather than that of merely having additional
elderly years.
The
STORY and the SCENARIO: A
musical romantic comedy about divorce, adjustment to mid-life and
the reuniting of two high school sweethearts. It is an adaptation from
the musical play and takes place in the Gulf Islands of the Pacific
Coast of Canada. This is a low budget film as the three scenes are
easily shot in existing natural scenery with one cabin sequence.
The PLOT LINE: Life, even after
fifty, is not without issues, and
as in any of the comicality, the sentimental is more profound, and of
greater relevant substance, when taken from the family problems of real
life. A
mature age group will identify with the premise that not only have we
all statistically been granted an extra one quarter of life to enhance
our 21st century lifestyle - we have been given a second chance. The music sets forth the premise that this is a time to
live and love - again - in this, our life's third quarter. Optional
music has been cut from the original one and one-half hour musical, such
that a director's taste may be reconsidered. © Lonnie
P. Pelletier 2008.
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NIGHT DANCES
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#04
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THE
FEATURE LENGTH FILM SCRIPT IS READY TO BE PRODUCED.
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The
LOG LINE: The human experiences of relationships not quite being
what they seem to be, are in unique and creative story forms, evocative
of characters know to many.
The STORY and STORY LINE:
Thirteen stories
of love, sex, loneliness, control, usury, ego and self, are all
presented with linking common denominators of worthiness. "Safe Haven, Terrified Bride, Wedding Exorcism,
Woman Of
A Straw Clan, A European Love, Little Secrets, Pride, A Flickering Lamp,
Narcissistic Loves, Church Dances, Circular Journey, Sid Canada Smith,
and Robbie
Phallic McGinnis" - are both comedy and drama.
The PLOT: A common thread of decadence is shown, coupled
with a
positive exploration for love and an understanding of the search
for wholeness of self.
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HISTORY TRAVEL
NOW - a
television MINI-SERIES.
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#05
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The
LOG LINE: The fallacy of the reality of world known historic sites compared to
their actual presentation is toyed with in this screenplay written for
television.
The STORY LINE: The author visits and explores numerous historic
sites with explaining the problems
of maintaining original construction material on both sites and
works of art, hundreds of
years old. Descriptions of visits to many historic
sites throughout our world, are integrated.
The PLOT LINE: The sites are shown to be rebuilt beyond that
which may be called authentic as antique. Imagine
Art Restored, Simulated Antiques, The Ambiance Of History,
Site Specific With Pepsi, Around The Ancient World,
Circular Journey Rules - was the chapter outline.
The repercussions of tourism changing, is explored with a plausible humor.
The conceptualization is based on the writer's former travels in
forty-six countries in Europe, Asia, South America, North America
and Africa.
The
initial layout for the television screenplays were for
digital production with Animated
Flash Software.
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500 YEARS -
a television 4 part MINI-SERIES.
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#06
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The
LOG LINE: The lives of the Pelletier descendants evolve from the
15th century through to the 20th century, showing the history of
Canada as entertainment.
The STORY LINE: The moves of the family coincide with the
beginnings of early settlements and the challenges of those
pioneering areas. As a four part series, the stories are both
stand alone chronicles and a reflection of history leading into
the future. The chronicles are about love, adventure, and
challenge with a balance of the realism of frustration and
failure.
The PLOT: Canadian civilization and culture has evolved and
expanded, in spite of often ridiculous administrative control by
both church and state.
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is a FOUR HOUR TELEVISION MINI-SERIES: |
| Part 1 |
"Survival" |
Perche, France |
15th century |
| Part 2 |
"A Land Of
Teenagers" |
Quebec |
16th century |
| Part 3 |
"On River
Banks" |
Quebec and New
Brunswick |
17th, 18th
century |
| Part 4 |
"Western
Canadian Lumbermen" |
Alberta and B.C. |
19th, 20th
century |
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The screenplay is near completion and
will be available in early 2009.
Parts 1 and 2 are available
for perusal for development discussions and contracting.
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